Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin
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Order of the Phoenix
You ain't got the right to tell me when and where to go
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Post by Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin on Dec 5, 2012 22:46:43 GMT -5
Sight Do you see us? We're right here. All of you, You talk and laugh with us, But are you so blind, That when you don't want to talk to someone, They don't exist? I'm your friend, The one you ask for help So what if I have an attitude, I'm human. I'm the girl you leave out, The girl who's always alone. But you're too blind to see all that. We believe in the unreal, The unseen. We get made fun of for some of it. The smiles we wear, They're fake. But your unseeing, unbelieveing eyes don't see it. When your eyes give out, Will you still judge as if they're still there? Or will you disvocer the truth about your so called friends? ~ A friend Invisible |
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Anelisa Taelyn Lafayette
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Employee at Weasley's Wizard Wheezes
If we can't find where we belong, we'll have to make it on our own.
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Post by Anelisa Taelyn Lafayette on Dec 5, 2012 22:48:17 GMT -5
Deep! I like the poem a lot, hon; I'm sure that your school will like it, too! A few typos, though, you might want to have someone go over it with a fine-tooth comb for you.
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Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin
Ministry Worker
Auror
Metamorphagus
Order of the Phoenix
You ain't got the right to tell me when and where to go
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Post by Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin on Dec 5, 2012 22:54:26 GMT -5
Then you do it because I'm trying to graph points and I really just want to it in my room...
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Fred Fabian Weasley
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Co-Owner of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes
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Everything that don't make sense about me, makes sense when I'm with you.
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Post by Fred Fabian Weasley on Dec 5, 2012 23:00:44 GMT -5
I really do love this! I agree with Arye, 'tis deep! I really could relate to it somewhat with a few people I know at school... well quite a few. Definitely very awesome! I'm sure they will like it!
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Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin
Ministry Worker
Auror
Metamorphagus
Order of the Phoenix
You ain't got the right to tell me when and where to go
Posts: 309
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Post by Nymphadora "Tonks" Lupin on Dec 5, 2012 23:02:56 GMT -5
Thank you Redd! I'm giving it to the editor tomorrow...hopefully.. I have to have it to her by Friday.
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Anelisa Taelyn Lafayette
Adult
Employee at Weasley's Wizard Wheezes
If we can't find where we belong, we'll have to make it on our own.
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Post by Anelisa Taelyn Lafayette on Dec 5, 2012 23:30:45 GMT -5
It'll go over beautifully, I'm sure! It's lovely!
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Kandace Lenore Poe
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Assistant to Sanada Yukiyo
Baby if you say you want me to stay, stay for the night, I'll change my mind.
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Post by Kandace Lenore Poe on Dec 6, 2012 20:09:05 GMT -5
I wrote it durring history class... I'm the only girl so... I get made fun of a lot...
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