Starting a Naruto Fanfic!

[Schuyler Alyce Van Alen]

guys... still here... still have characters.. Redd do you remember the relationship we had with my princess ninja chick? Because I think I remember and then there was Neko, the theif. If you guys haven't forgot me would you mind helping me?

[Redd]

Of course Analiese! I do remember! It's with Kaito and the Princess chick, where he's saved her a couple times before, and she was a little bit... let's just say not the nicest in the world about it, saying she could've done it herself. Really I think the two could eventually like each other, though Kaito really hates the village right now, so he might not be friendly when they would first meet up together again. I really could see a love/hate relationship between the two, maybe even turn into a romantic love/hate relationship.

The Thief, we decided would have the Hoshigatigan (Misspelled but I'm not looking at it right now ), and somehow be connected with one of Arye's characters. I don't remember the details, but I know it there.



Also! Arye! You said the other day about Reiko dying! I first was against it, but then I thought... Moudouken requires the user to see their best friend die before their eyes (and worst enemy, but let's ignore that for a sec), and if Reiko died before his eyes... Boom! Half of his requirement to get his last Moudouken star!

[Arye Tyler]

Actually, I thought of a plot device that could work with Ryuu v. Raiden.

If the host was absolutely convinced that the close friend was dead, would that also suffice to fulfill half of the condition?

[Schuyler Alyce Van Alen]

Dude... my school sucks they blocked proboards and wiki... Stupid school rules..

[Redd]

Stupid school! I hate that they block so many sites... but I guess it's for some of the good of the other kids...

Anyways, yeah, Arye, though I would warn you, Ryuu's Moudouken let's him see and feel a person's chakra signature, which disappears when one dies. What do you have in mind?

[Emilia Lianne Auditore]

Raiden and Rieko are fairly close in age and have chakra signatures that often cause them to be mistaken for each other at a distance. If, during one of their frequent battles, he nearly killed her, his chakra signature would easily overwhelm hers and could cause Ryuu to think that she was dead. Poof! One of the conditions met!

[Redd]

Woot! I think that would work quite well! And I already have a fairly good idea for his worst enemy. I was thinking that perhaps his worst enemy would be the only one who would keep him tied to the Leaf Village, and it's not Manami, but the 5 year old son of his... He wouldn't be willing to kill his own son, but if his little son were to die, he would have no ties ever. He also might try to revive his son as well, just as Harumi did with the Sage of Six Paths.

And I thought of something that might be pretty cool with his Moudouken, which is that he might see visions of anyone else who possessed the Moudouken, but I dunno if that is too cheesy/powers/unimportant.

[Emilia Lianne Auditore]

Actually, I think that's a pretty cool idea for the Moudouken.

Now, regarding his son...

I'll say this. To unlock Massao, Rieko had to kill her worst enemy. Her worst enemy, however, wasn't external; it was her own inner-self. There are two sides to Rieko: the rarely-seen Inner Rieko and the usual Outer Rieko. Inner Rieko takes the appearance that Rieko did as a child and essentially embodies the emotions and conscience that she cast aside. This was the side of herself that she had to fight and kill.

I think that you could turn Ryuu's issue into a man v. self thing.

Just wondering, but do you ever want Ryuu and Rieko to get together?

[Redd]

I like it, a lot, really! Perhaps he has to cut all the ties he has to those who could stand in the way of his goal, because really, deep inside he does care about those at the Hidden Leaf, who couldn't after growing up there and having friends who cared about them? Are you meaning something like that? Like killing the side of himself that actually cares about those people? It would be quite interesting.

As for getting the two together, idk. I've got a few plots/arcs that I would like to do, and over it there would be a lot of hinting/if-your-smart-it-smacks-you-in-the-face of their relationships. It would definitely take a lot of time, and it wouldn't be the 'happy' ending sort of relationship, with a lot of bumps on the way, but I do think that eventually the two may get together, if one of them don't time during that amount of time... Heh... I have so many deaths planned out of my characters already, and I won't tell you yet, until I get everything planned out and some of it mostly written as to whom of those I've created I'm killing off and in what ways.

[Arye Tyler]

Yeah, like that! Rieko buried that side of herself so deep in her own mind that it practically never surfaces. "Inner" (essentially the better parts of) Rieko might as well be dead.

It wouldn't be those two if it was a necessarily happy relationship! Haha, what with Rieko going blind and Ryuu losing physical sensation!

[Redd]

I really like it! I think I can work something like that into everything! (especially since I really only have summarizing ideas about some of the arcs and what will happen. Here's a sneak peak that gave me inspiration for one of the arcs here) Trouble, with a Capital T, which rhymes with P... I dunno where I'm going from there to make sense, but anyways... yeah.

Exactly! I think that his senses being lost will be his biggest downfall, and might lose him a few fights when he starts realizing his hearing lose especially. When I think about him looses his touch feeling, I think of Tales of Symphonia when Lloyd gives Collette a drink and says it's hot, but then says it's cold, before tricking her again and saying it's actually hot... Heh...

[Arye Tyler]

I love that picture!! Haha, I got my ideas for Rieko from songs. XD
In regards to Mari, I think that she could be friends with Z. It could be an interesting way to push the fact that Mari knows more than she lets on, y'know?

Haha, I loved that scene! Rieko will be angry with Ryuu when she leaned that his kekkei genkai is what's causing his sensory depravation. That'll make her go back to using Massao constantly and going blind.

[Redd]

Heck yeah! I got a few from songs too, but not too much, don't listen often... As for Mari and Z, I could see the two being friends as well, and that would make Ryuu suspicious if he found out, and Kaito. I have a pretty cool plot section where Kaito meets up with Z, and they have a pretty cool scene, where Kaito doesn't want to believe Z, and he attacks and a few more things I prefer to keep secret until I get it all planned out.

Oh Reiko.... Ryuu will definitely hide it for a while, and Reiko insisting on using Massao after finding out. She won't stop him from using his Moudouken, but you know, he would think she's being too overprotective, and that's she is blowing out of proportion and try to convince her to stop using Massao.

[Emilia Lianne Auditore]

Mari's the type that doesn't like thinking about romance (she's scared that nobody would love her because she's a Jinchuriki), so I imagine that she would appreciate Z not having those sort of expectations of her. She probably confesses to him a lot, so her sudden secrecy (at Rie's request) would be odd. Mari is the medic-nin of Team 9, so she would've noticed when something was wrong with Rieko.

Rie will be more than happy to point out that Ryuu's being a hypocrite, haha. XD I imagined a big fight between the two where Ryuu finally realizes that she had no intention of living a long life anyway. She's always figured that she'd die young (she actually reined Gyuki in by threatening to kill herself; she literally said "My life only matters to you, so shut up and behave or I'll end it right now.") and hates being useless, which is why she overused Massao.

[Redd]

Woot! I love the friendship between the two. Also, what would her relationship with Ryuu be? Mari I mean.

And Ryuu will try to insist that even without Massao, which she needs to stop spamming use out of, to him, that she is very useful, and that he probably wouldn't get to his goal without her and the rest of the Jinchuriki's help. Kekkei Genkai don't mean anything towards that goal if he loses one of them. He'd point out the others who have been a big help without Massao or amazing dojutsu.

Also, a couple of questions as I'm planning out some things. How would one bring the whirlpool barrier down? Rieko is just ill in her village, right? Would Mari try to come to find her and contact her once the barrier is up? Just want a few details because I'm planning out the first few arcs right now, even though I don't have the 5,6, or 7 tails, nor the Mizukage, Hokage (but I have an idea for that), I think that's all the Kages after those two... Almost done with Tsuchikage, and I have an idea of how to work in the Sage's Story.